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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading


▶ Topic : cause of the Little Ice Age (해커스 정규 p121)

▶ Your Answer :

The reading passage and the lecture both talk about a cause of the Little Ice Age. The author of the reading suggests three possible causes of the Little Ice Age. However, the lecturer rebuffs the reading passage’s arguments by giving three convincing evidences.

To start with, the lecturer asserts that diminished solar radiation is not the cause of the Little Ice Age. To be specific, even though observable sunspots were decreased, it was not responsible to total amount of solar radiation. Therefore, she says there is no prove that diminished solar radiation led the Little Ice Age. However, this view is in direct opposition to the reading that says diminished solar radiation caused the Little Ice Age.

On top of that, the lecturer mentions that the Little Ice Age lasted more than five years. However, a volcanic eruption worked only for a while. Therefore, she claims that the volcanic eruption does not take into consideration. On the other hand, the author of the reading asserts that a massive volcanic eruption triggered the Little Ice Age by reducing an amount of solar radiation.

Finally, the lecturer argues that an increase in the Earth’s reflectivity is not the significant reason of the Little Ice Age. She supports her idea by suggesting that an amount of cloud cover decreased in the Little Ice Age because of declined water evaporation. This view is contrary to the reading passage that asserts that the Little Ice Age was caused by the increase in the Earth’s reflectivity.

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