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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading


▶ Topic : a brain scan lie detector (해커스 정규 p124)

▶ Your Answer :

The reading passage and the lecture both talk about a brain scan lie detector. The author of the reading suggests that the brain scan lie detector is accurate. However, the lecturer rebuffs the reading passage’s arguments by giving three convincing evidences.

To start with, the lecturer asserts that the brain scan lie detector may mistakenly classify true statements as dishonest. To be specific, when a subject is suppressed or embarrassed by sensitive questions or certain situations, he chooses which details to share. This process may be identified as dishonest. However, this view is in direct opposition to the reading that says true statements are not classified as lies.

On top of that, the lecturer mentions that there is no standard criterion to identify true or false, because each person’s brain differently functions. Therefore, she claims that analyzing process is still required to identify truths, which means that the results may not be accurate. However, it is contrary to the reading passage that suggests that the results are objectively interpreted.

Finally, the lecturer claims that it is easier for subjects to fool the brain scan lie detector. She supports her idea by suggesting two methods. Subjects can fool it by performing complex mental process or rehearsing their untruthful statements. On the other hand, the author of the reading asserts that subjects cannot trick the test on purpose.

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