▶ Your Answer : There has been a social issue over whether or not parents should give some money to their children in terms of children's high grade. Although some people mention that it is good thoght because children can try to study because of thought of money, others point out that not always it is good idea. In my opinion, I would firmly feel with this statement negatively. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. First of all, one of the reasons is that studying is only students' achievement. Students have to study their subjects in order to improve their life. Simply, if high score's consequent is money, students will always study for money. It is amiss thought. For example, if some parent gives money to child because of child's high score in exam, the child can think 'I will study hard!' at that time. However, if his(her) parents' financial circumstance will be poor in the future, the child can think 'I cannot study hard because of money'. This is terrible aspect. Therefore, I think it is not good idea ratter than other ideas relatively. Furthermore, another reason is possibility that students can be remote from studying. It is because if students have much money, relatively, they can face more funny activities such as shopping, computer game, and buying clothes than students who have less money. Actually, according to a Korea educational firm, many student's scores gradually abate because of many activities that related about money. In 1990, most students could not hang out due to poor money so they could concentrate on studying. However, modern students hardly study because they have a lot money that can hang out. Therefore, I confidently affirm that limited money is more helpful for students. In short, parents should not give money to their children, which especially should not be related about children's school score. It is because possibility of children's bad thought and terrible characteristic of money. |