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■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading


▶ Topic : agree? disagree?

The best films are those that provide lessons about real life.

    


▶ Your Answer :

   

Evidently, films play a significant role in improving people’s life where they work and play. There might be some people who believe that the best films are those that give people lessons about real life, while others do not think this way. Both sides may have their own reason to support their views. If I had to choose one, I would say that the best films don't be necessarily educational. There are several reasons as follows.

 

To begin with, a role of the films is relieving people’s stress. When they watch a film, they are likely to want to deal with a lot of pressure and strain. For this reason, fun films that include a wide range of funny scenes can be a welcome distraction from real life. Let me bring up my personal example to describe this point. When my sister was in high school, she often felt depressed thinking that her life became an exhausting routine. To survive in a competitive world, she spent the whole day studying all academic subjects. Fortunately, she was able to let off some steams by watching movies every Sunday. This is because the movies was humorous and thus made her laugh a lot. By doing this, she could get over the feeling of depression. Otherwise, she could have involved herself in dangerous activities, such as drugs and fights.

 

On top of that, many schools are developing new ways of teaching students and companies are helping many worker to easily have access to education materials. What this means is that people are learning a lot from the schools and the companies, so the films don’t necessarily provide them lessons. When people make the films boring by focus on giving people only lessons, people will be less happy and content. For instance, my youngest brother worked as an accountant at a law firm. He had to spend his most of free time studying and maintain hectic schedules. Accordingly, it was difficult for him to meet his friends, family and have a hobby. However, he could easily feel happy and satisfied with his life by watching a film. watching the film is easy way to feel so great because he did not have to spend time on scheduling meeting with busy friends. He realized that he was enough to learn a lot from companies, so the films must be tools to make people happy.

 

All things considered, I strongly assert that there are some circumstances where the best films are humorous and fun for the reasons I have mention above.

 

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