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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer


▶ Topic : Students can learn more effectively with the help of the Internet

▶ Your Answer :

A variety of opinion may exist over the argument that students can learn more effectively with the help of the Internet. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree that the advent of Internet improves effectiveness for students to learn. The following two ideas can be valid evidences to back up my opinion. First, students can save their time and effort. Second, students can ask questions to others without meeting them in person.

To start with, students can save their time and efforts by using the Internet. To be specific, there are a lot of websites, which include great amount of information. It means that students do not need to go to a library to find information. Also, there is no guarantee that the library where they go has the information that they find. In that case, students may waste their time and efforts. For example, my house was far from a library. One day, I went to the library because I needed to find some books relating to my assignment. However, there were not any books I found. It would not happen if I found information on the Internet. This anecdote shows how important it is for students to use the Internet.

On top of that, students can get answers to their questions without meeting others in person. As I already mentioned, there are many kinds of useful websites on the Internet. Thanks to these websites, students can also get advice from people who have professional knowledges in their field. In my case, when I was in a high school, I needed to build my background knowledge to conduct experiments. I searched on the Internet and found some useful websites. I could contact to a professor by sending an email and ask some questions. He not only provided me with useful researches that solved my problems but also told me techniques for experiments. This contributes with my insistence that students can learn more effectively thanks to the Internet.

To sum up, students can save their time and efforts by using the Internet. Also, they can ask questions and get answers without directly meeting others. In this regard, I totally side with perspective that students can learn effectively thanks to the advent of the Internet.

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