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Some people think that students with tidy rooms are more likely to succeed than those with messy ones. They may think clean rooms are not important factors for the success of students. However, in my opinion, students with clean rooms can obtain greater success. This is because tidy rooms help students become more concentrated and they can save their time in tidy rooms. To begin with, people can get more concentrated in the clean rooms. Usually, concentration make students more creative and solve their problems effectively. Therefore, it can be a good mechanism to succeed for students. Let me take my experience as an example. When I was in high school, I could not get a good score in my mathematic subject. Since it was very hard for me, I was not be able to concentrate the subject. One day, my friend suggested to clean my room to improve my concentration and I followed his recommendation. After cleaning my room, I felt more refreshed and comfortable and I could concentrate on my subject. Eventually, I got the better score in the subject. On top of that, students can save time with tidy rooms. The clean rooms help students use their materials effectively, they can save their time. Therefore, they can have extra time and students can spend their extra time on tasks to have good qualities. For example, when I was in middle school, I did not like cleaning my room. Even I thought of cleaning my room as my mother’s job. One day, my art teacher gave me an assignment which required many tools. However, I did not submit my homework on time. Since I did not know about where my materials are, I spent a lot of time to search my tools. If I had worked in the tidy room, I would have found my stuff quickly and finished the assignment. To sum up, I believe that clean rooms help students obtain their success. This is due to the fact that students can get more concentrated and they can save their time. |