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Some people think that people can deal with problems on their own so they do not need the help of the government. However, in my opinion, the government assistance is required because there is limitaion and the role of the government. To begin with, because of the deterioration of economy the people who are looking for jobs or need a lot of money for supporting their family cannot reach to their goals. For example, there is a poll conducted by Seoul university, with students as respondents. The purpose of the survey was to understand the consensus view about getting a job in today's society. The majority of respondents ranked government assistance over their own ability. An overwhelming 80% responded that they are trying to get a job, but there are not enough opportunities even though they are perfectly ready to work. This survey proves that there is limitation of surviving in this completetive world. On top of that, A country have a duty of protecting their people. Also in the contemporary society welfare is one of the most essential facotrs. For example, the rate of solitary death is increasing in my country nowadyas since they do not have people who take care of them. In my friend's case, his grandfather was very sick but his family did not have enough money to pay for hospital so they could not do anything. But my friend tried to find the solution and fornunately recognized they could get help from the government. Thanks to the government assistance finally my friend's grandfather could cure his sick and now he is helathy enough. To sum up, there are many people who can solve their problems but there are still people who cannot deal with their problems. In this regard the government help should be mandatory. |