▶ Your Answer :
Various opinions
exist over the argument that living outside of their town makes people more
successful and happier. As far as I am concerned, I am in complete agreement
with the argument. The two ideas stated below support my point of view.
First of all,
people can find emotional relief by living outside of their hometown because it
is effective for boosting people's moods. These days, many people get tired of
comparing them with other people, which causes a lot of stress. By staying
apart from the hometown, they do not need to compare their situations with
other people who they have known for a long time. In this respect, being out of
their hometown can be a great way to refresh people's minds. My personal
experience can be used to prove this point. When I was in the middle school, my
family moved from my hometown, Seongnam to other city, called Goheung. There
was not a severe competition for private education which often found in my
hometown. By having more relief while living in Goheung, I became much
satisfied with my life and then my exam scores got higher than when I was
stressed comparing myself with other fellows while I was in Seongnam. This
experience supports the idea that living apart from the hometown area can
actually alleviate tension and make a good mood for one's success.
Secondly,
moving out of their town is an excellent way of enhancing insights and outlooks
since people can have various types of experience. While growing up, many
people repeatedly meet the same people such as neighbors, teachers, and friends.
Most of the information and knowledge is conveyed with the source's viewpoint
and they can easily become shortsighted if they do not have chances to
experience and broaden their horizon while living in different surroundings. A research
conducted by Kim Young, a renowned professor in Korea found that those who have
experience of moving to other places have more success in their life than those
who stayed in their original town. Many responded that their experiences going
outside of their original living area gave them a broad view and satisfaction
in their life. Therefore, staying outside of the place where they were raised
can be an effective way to gain well-balanced views that helps people to
achieve success in their life.
To sum up, I
believe my explanations above sufficiently prove the advantage of moving out of
their town. Obviously, the significance of emotional relief and abundant
experience gained from moving out cannot be overemphasized enough for people's
success and happiness.
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