◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 'better' 발음 두 음절로 발음 해주세요.
- 'free time' 에서 'free'발음 길게 해주세요'
- 페이스를 조금 줄여주시고, 문장과 문장 사이를 잘 끊어주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- One of the reasons for why I believe this is true
----> One of the reasons why I think in this way is that...
- 'if there are some pending works...'
----> 'if there is some pending work'
- 'after finishing stuff that I was supposed do'
-----> 'after finishing all the tasks that I was supposed to do'
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적인 내용이 좋습니다.
- 그러나 마지막 부분에서 여행 얘기와 'and it's exciting experience' 대신에 주제를 다시 한번 언급해주시는 것이 더 좋을 것 같습니다. Therefore, I believe that finishing work straight away is much better than leaving it until the deadline.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 3