◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 톤이 좋습니다.
- 수정이 필요한 발음은 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- so the freedom of workers are very important
----> so the freedom of workers is very important
- where it allowed a lot of freedom for workers
----> where it gave a lot of freedom to its workers
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 주제에서 멀어지지 않고 예시와 아이디어 연결이 좋습니다.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 4